Thursday, May 04, 2006

cicada shell—
the cradle

- dustin neal


Anonymous Anonymous said...

nice parallel.

7:36 AM  
Blogger texas haijin said...

i edited this haiku. it was cicada shell— / the envelope / empty. however, jason pointed it out to me that it was almost like one of his haiku. i felt i ought to change the image/words. i'm not a fan of the edit, but i felt as if i ought to do so.

9:14 AM  
Blogger polona said...

a good edit, too. thought-provoking...

3:02 PM  

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