Saturday, May 06, 2006

the howingl loo chases
the watwermelon vendor
under his cart

angelee

Loo
is a strong, hot and dry wind which blows over Northern
and parts of Western India during day time in summer.

3 Comments:

Blogger Little Onion said...

i'm glad you told us about 'loo' because i had a very surreal image of a toilet chasing the water melon vendor..

feels very uch like an internal stanza from a renku due to the decision not to put a cut in it

i like it

LO

10:33 PM  
Blogger angelee said...

thank you LO,I am in really sweating it out this year and he eerie howl of the loo is very dietressing indeed,
best always,angelee

11:08 PM  
Blogger Denis said...

Angelee,

It is an ill wind, indeed, that blows no good - and we have your ku to prove it. Well done!

10:42 AM  

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