Friday, May 26, 2006

leavesdance_00
leaves dance in
rhythmic waves of wind-
flowers bloom to watch

1 Comments:

Blogger angelee said...

andrew,please avoid personification in your haiku
here are some useful links,best wishes,angelee

http://www.cyberoz.net/city/dhugal/davidson.html
http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/haiku/haiku.html
http://www.tempslibres.org/tl/en/theo/mode13.html
http://www.haiku.insouthsea.co.uk/english.htm

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