Sunday, May 28, 2006

Memorial Day . . .
a veteran surrenders
to the toy gun

4 Comments:

Blogger Denis said...

Dustin,

This one resonates for me. I have done and seen this many times. There is a wealth of meaning in it.

3:10 PM  
Blogger texas haijin said...

Thanks!

3:54 PM  
Blogger Alan Summers said...

Hi Dustin,

I absolutely concur with Denis here.

Plus, I feel your haiku is deceptively simple, and makes it very accessible to people from many walks of life, and that can make magic for people who don't normally like poetry. (-;

A clean, accessible, classic haiku, thank you Dustin.

7:15 AM  
Blogger polona said...

i, too, like this one!

12:28 PM  

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