Sunday, May 28, 2006

rain wet pebbles
breathe out their stillness
the first cicada

angelee

4 Comments:

Blogger Denis said...

Angelee,

This is a wonderful "the moment before" haiku - the stillness is about to be broken. The opening image is delicious!

9:56 AM  
Blogger Little Onion said...

thank you angelee

lo

11:33 AM  
Blogger polona said...

a beautiful delicate haiku!

12:30 PM  
Blogger angelee said...

Thank you Denis,little onion and polona,am grateful for your feedback anglee

5:54 PM  

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