Monday, May 15, 2006

whiteblossoms
summer-
his fingers scatter
the blossoms

Sangeet

8 Comments:

Blogger polona said...

beautifully done, sangeet!

3:23 PM  
Blogger Aurora said...

Breathtaking!

8:24 PM  
Blogger extraspecialbitter said...

sangeet - this is a wonderful haiku, and I can only echo aurora's description of your photograph as breathtaking!

5:41 AM  
Blogger sangeet said...

Thanks Polona, Aurora and Paul! :)
Glad that it resonated..

Sangeet

1:00 PM  
Blogger Little Onion said...

yes i like

interesting for me (always) is the use of 'blossoms' or 'blossom' - i generally say 'blossom' for plural and singular as is tradition perhaps here in the uk but since hearing 'blossoms'so often from friends outside the uk it doesn't jar so much these days - here it works for me as a few 'blossoms' in a jar - wheras 'blossom' gives me a whole tree covered in blossom

now why did he scatter those blossoms? and who was it? :-)

LO

2:19 PM  
Blogger its_baxter said...

i agree with Aurora. this picture is breathtaking.

4:39 PM  
Blogger sangeet said...

Thanks LO and Ruthanne!

LO: some things are best left to the imagination ;)

3:06 PM  
Blogger Denis said...

Sangeet,

Okay - not asking, just enjoying.
Very nice indeed.

bw,
Denis

3:30 PM  

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