summer noon-
defining sound from
cicadas
posted by J. Andrew Lockhart at 7:09 PM
Thursday, July 20, 2006
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4 Comments:
cicadas --
my unborn grandchild's
heartbeat
I love that! I have an unborn child here with me so I'll think about that - :)
Great sound haiku!
I really like the summer noon haiku, and its unusualness of 'defining sound from cicadas'; kinda slanting Basho and his penetrated rocks!
As I'm an extra special bitter man, living in Real Ale country, I have to say that your haiku is also quite something special.
I can imagine its power not just by being read, but read out live. Very very simple, but a lot of layers.
All my best to both of you for these children to be born!
Alan- Thank you for your nice words!
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