too hot
dairy cows
gathered in the creek
stooping willows
something there
crossing the road
heat shimmer
inside the kiln
a new pot bakes
sky-blue glaze
summer forest
the stench of carrion
beneath honeysuckle
posted by Denis at 9:18 AM
Wednesday, August 02, 2006
dairy cows
gathered in the creek
stooping willows
something there
crossing the road
heat shimmer
inside the kiln
a new pot bakes
sky-blue glaze
summer forest
the stench of carrion
beneath honeysuckle
4 Comments:
like the cow and willow haiku very much
that would be a good name for a pub
The Cow & Willow
i'll meet you there for a pint of the best
LO
I feel it, I see it, I smell it. I love these.
i'm ready for the heat to be gone
Hi
My first visit to your interesting blog today.
I tried my hand at Haiku a couple of days back. My first attempt. Would you please let me know if these bits qualify to be Haiku?
Hot air against face
Like bread being baked
In an oven
Orchestra playing
Unhappy and heartbroken
Restless feet dance
What do you think? :)
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